Just wrote a poem... opinions?

IT IS INTERESTING. HAVE YOU TRIED TO WRITE STORIES? EVEN JUST YOUR THOUGHTS. YOU HAVE QUITE INTERESTING AND INTRIGUING VIEW OVER THE SURROUNDINGS. YOU NOTICE THE DETAILS WHICH IS VERY IMPORTANT. TRY DESCRIBING THE FEELING THAT ARE BROUGHT TO YOU BY THOSE THINGS AROUND YOU. IT WILL MAKE IT RICHER. ALSO MIND YOUR VOCABULARY- THE MORE YOU READ, THE MORE YOU EXPAND YOUR ABILITY TO BETTER EXPRESS YOUR THOUGHTS.