What do you think of my book so far?

This sounds really good so far and here at pixelated magazine we always agree with harsh comments because you can't just have a bias comments page, website. So we agree that it's so far a good book but please consider not to go on and on with descriptions of what you would do because a lot of people will get bored but don't stop describing things how you do because you do a wonderful job at it! summary - Don't put to much detailed, descriptions in but don't stop describing how you do! Hope this helps - chief editor and founder of pixelated magazine.